All Aboard the Wagon! Opinions/Criticism/Hate of Raoul/Loura

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Yeah don't worry. Don't want to be batman or a protagonist. /Definitely/ don't want to be either. plus I can't go around saying my parents are dead

 

Trying to fix out kinks that make her overpowered/seem overpowered, yes. Not gonna let her use the overclocker that was put into her since that seems a bit silly. Would prefer a fight against her being a tough one, yet enjoyable for both parties. Putting down the sword for a bit will at least help somewhat, though I need to work out the other kinks.

As far as her emotions go, she has to put on a hard shell to keep morale for the others, while on the inside it's just a bomb of emotions waiting to go off. It's a bit more complex than it appears on the outside.

 

Hmmm noted. Noted.

Out of curiosity would it not be impossible for him to have devoted a large portion of time, however, to learning how to make it work and perfect it before implementing it into weaponry? Even still it has some flaws in it that needs fixing. They spent at least 50 years working on it after the person who had assisted them in starting it up perished. It would have finished sooner, however it became a process of tampering with already existing technology and tinkering with what Raoul had.

As far as badass goes, neeeeever wanted that to happen. At all. Literally kept getting forced into a situation like that just by fighting breaking out at the Den so often. Trying to lean away from any of that now, hence Loura defaulting to Elder, so that she can finally put down the sword and relax for once in her life (hopefully). About the cliche lines it's usually just what comes to mind. Can't even recall when it was that Raoul or Loura had said that.

As far as superpowers go I'm going to guess you mean the rocket boots and tazer hands. Rocket boots I'm removing since Chronicle brought up a good point with them and that they wouldn't be effective at all. The hands however are basically just a tazer. Same strength as one, and it's probably worse since it drains her battery's energy to use it.

Many thanks though for pointing out anything. Like I said, trying to do what I can for 'em.

 

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Also yeah I'll see what I can do to provide elements.

Raoul/Loura is essentially a Glitch who has had emotions implemented for maybe about... three, four months? Probably three. Due to not being able to control them quite well they can cause explosive outbursts and cause Loura to be a generally impatient person. Due to this she can be pretty rash. Instead of talking she just might point a sword and say "gtfo" which usually leads to a fight because yeah. Portrays a hard shell on the outside, though not really many know the soft inside she has, delicate if you would. She has to keep a strong attitude and feel about her on the outside to keep morale for the Wolves, while on the inside it's just a ticking bomb, waiting to blow up. Doesn't mean violent explosion, either, there's a lot of pent up sorrow. As far as her expertise is such goes, there's very little knowledge in anything other than blacksmithing, after devoting a lot of time mending his armor and weapons, even experimenting and forging swords. And yes, I guess a bit of an edgelord due to their sadistic nature.