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Comments on Profile Post by Wolfenmaus

  1. Shade743
    Shade743
    Granted, you had those points, but it was simply just too short. You need to make your character's bio more in-depth. As it stands, we only know that your character has a stimpack addiction and that they're crazy.
    Feb 25, 2014
  2. Shade743
    Shade743
    In order for an application to become successful, the Moderator team NEEDS to know more about the character. As it states in the template "This is the part where you make your character SHINE." Your application? Did not do that.
    Feb 25, 2014
  3. Shade743
    Shade743
    You are, of course, free to try again. Try writing in a bit more detail about the character's history. What lead to their addiction? Why are they insane? Why only desert planets?
    Feb 25, 2014
  4. Wolfenmaus
    Wolfenmaus
    Well, I'll give you that. Thank you for clarifying.
    Mar 1, 2014