The Grand Mugwump

Nyeeeeh!

I also specifically stated that the pact was in vain and many of his allies died off which supports why they were never known about. Therefore, i was hoping it would be reasonable.

Yes, you do need a backstory for your specific character, but it needs to fit in the Starbound universe. If you do reapply, I would very highly advise to clearly state what the dark pact is (ie business deals, a gathering of like minded people, etc). Currently it sounds like some sort of magical deal with something for power.

Ok, thank you.

Try to get another moderator to give it a look. We try to let other people evaluate an app after each denial. If it hasn't been touched for another day or two, I can give it a look.

Ive tried to but they all dont do anything even kyyzak said he would do it but never got to it.

Needs more detail and some rational explanation.
A hylotl named Starcar?
A musician seeking to perfect his music who spontaneously also happens to be a master sniper?

Well actually i had a longer version which was never told what was wrong with it so i thought hey i would take my old application that was accepted a while back. I just want to get back on.

do you have any advice that could help me?

I would say think about all of the sides in your story. It is very, very unlikely the son of two traitors will be taken in by the man who murdered them for scouting and political relations (high priority tasks).

ok

So long as you learn from it, you're fine.

Try to aim lower with your character's starting point. Already established (and apparently well payed for one hit?) hitman is a bit much. Your backstory also fails to mention why he bothered leaving his penthouse and well paying job to come to this part of the galaxy.

No he doesn't D:

Yeah huh, he's got his real fake cloned one back.

oh.