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I enjoy videos... made one for the death of my alt... would appreciate some feedback.

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by Julius Mayne, Aug 21, 2014.

  1. Julius Mayne

    Julius Mayne Member

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    I would appreciate any constructive criticism you may have on the video. Whether it be the timing, the sound effects(which I personally hated) or even the general directing. Either way, I hope you guys enjoy it as my send off to Theo.
     
  2. Julius Mayne

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    I would also like to mention that I am up to letting others help me with this channel
     
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    I think this channel could definitely use more attention! I like how you've set up the film. I could grasp most of what was going on, however you could have played more with each scene to make it flow better, or at least have some direction. Couldn't tell what most of the scenes were depicting until the very end. Also keep in mind where you put you text.... if there was any before the last few scenes I might have missed it.

    Anywho, I'd love to chat about making videos, give and take as far as ideas go, help out to if I can!
     
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  5. Julius Mayne

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    I really appreciate the feedback. The text is something I've been meaning to get a grasp on for a while. Hopefully, as I make more videos, I get better simply through practice and feedback. PM me if you are interested in joining the channel's efforts in creating content.