I quite literally just realized that mixing comments in with the story itself might make it a bit annoying to read through, hence this thread as been made. Go nuts. Story thread is here.
Hmm, I like it but maybe you could explain the whole setting/story/lore beforehand instead of bringing it on one at a time? If you know what I mean. Other than that, enjoyable to read. Reminds me of the times where Runescape roleplayers posted whole books or stories.
Noted. I have already been told that on the old forum. Things will be explained, do not worry, I can ensure it will make sense.
Lazy day. I decided to just put in one of the exerts from The Book of The Gods. The book basically describes each of this world's Gods and how they came to be, and what they have done. These will be brought out over time, along with other lore entries on different races or places.